Fallen Captive

Another sketch...please critique.

I censured your slave, unchained;
I am your relic, sell me silently
Your candied eyes cried chauvinism
Your country is my failed devotion,
Inferal darkness will shroud in fanfare
Beside bleak, erotic, persision
On your abled quest to break my heart
Hell's harlot, steal my lips away
My hands entangled in the stars
Cradle my tears on you cheeks


Breath with me
I'm not a monster.......


(finish)