The White Flame

This is the rough draft of TWF, and as such, it is here in its entirety. Many flaws that exist, I am already aware of, and some of them have already been fixed in the draft I'm currently working on. That said, I'm always happy to get constructive criticism, and if it's something I've already heard, it just highlights the issue even more. I'd like to get this story published some day in the not-too-terribly distant future, so please, let me know what you really think of this version of it.