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good. shouldnt beep out the cuss words though.
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I like it but not att the wording. "s***" would have sounded more emotional than, "stuff." i mean, i know "s***" doesnt rhyme though....
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Sounds like something id right. its all touchy and stuff. nice flow. i like it.
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I like the word choice. (:
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I really freakin' love this! its very relatable!
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It is good, but i think you could have used different word choice. it sounds kinda kid friendly.
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I like this because this is so true. This is how almost all the guys are in highschool. Its makes guys like us look bad.
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I personally think that this is a pretty solid poem. The very beginning is, in my opinion, the best part. It has a good flow.
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