Review Requests: OFF
1 Public Reviews Given
1 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of one  
Review by Shannon Newsome Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)
A; I like the deconstructionist attitude that you have taken with this poem, however, the punctuation is a bit confusing. I am not sure if you are speaking of a dualist nature or simply forgot to add the possesive on the word minds. I like the idea of it being plural. I especially enjoyed the phrase "pass the compass," outstanding.

B: I would say that if you are going with the EE Cummings approach, stick with it--leave all punctuation out, let it run and run. I like the direction your peom is taking a collision of Jung and Derrida.
1 Reviews • *Magnify*
Page of 1 • 25 per page   < >