I loved reading your letter. I do personally have different views, because of how I have been raised and what I've grown up with. But you make very good points, and I like looking at issues from everyones point of view. Most arguments made against abortion (that I have read or heard) aren't well based, researched, or have any good points. Reading an argument like this was extremely refreshing, and I'm honestly glad to find someone putting genuine thought into an issue like this. (Sorry if I'm being a tad confusing lol)
My basic point is: You have a great letter. Well written. Great points brought up. And I love your perspective, even if our perspectives are different. Reading this helps me form a more informed opinion of issues like this, and it helps me see how others are viewing it. Thank you Lobelia is truly blessed!
I'm really interested in this story you have going here! I don't understand the pacing much though, and as a reader I feel like the story is being rushed through with little dialogue. It might help to take time and go through old chapters, adding more depth and words into each one. A good story takes some time, and a great story takes even more. Always remember that when you run into a block, or feel like you need to finish the chapter NOW! Overall nice story, interesting plot, and mysterious characters! I like how the plot kept drawing me in, keep it up!
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