that was a really good story. it had me captivated by the suspense, but then in the end, i just started to laugh really hard. well don. i hope to read more of your stories.
that was great. there were some grammatical errors and i saw a couple of mispelled words, but otherwise the chapter is great. i know that there's going to be a happy ending in this story, but i just want to know if adit is going to stay even though he can't? you don't have to tell me if you don't want to. i can wait, it's just that i kind of got attached to him. congratulations on receiving an upgraded membership by the way, my mom wouldn't pay for it either. someone sent me one as a gift as well, but i don't know who.
that was funny. it kind of caught me off guard when i saw the word 'elves,' but then i just started laughing a couple of seconds after seeing the word. great job.
i've always wanted to write a ghost story, but i could never do it. you did an amazing job with this story. it felt a little rushed, but it's still great.
that was funny. i can't wait for more. the name adit sounds a little weird though. does it mean something? does it reveal something about where he came from.
I thought that it was worth reading. I've been working on a story with the same concept, and I'm relieved that I'm not the only one. I sort of knew how the story would end, but I like how you tried to add suspense. The story is also well thought out. Great job.
That was a great poem. I definitely like how you tried to write it with a rhyming scheme. I know how hard it is to write a peome that actually rhymes (for me at least). Anyway, I like the concept of the poems. At firt, I thought that it was going to be one of those sad poems, but then it actually has a happy ending. If it doesn't actually have a happy ending, then I apologize for assuming that. Maybe that's just how I see it.
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