Very Good! I greatly enjoyed this piece! Go You! Your use of description and emotion flow together nicely! I can't find a lot wrong with it. The only thing I can think of is Coalesce? what is that? I have never heard of it before. Anywho, I think it was wonderful and worthy of reward! Fantastic!
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