This was an interesting poem. I wasn't sure about it when I first started reading, but found myself drawn in and needing to finish it. I think the way it's presented leads to that as well. The short broken phrases make you read one to the next until you're finished. Finally, I liked the last line, if it is a last line as it's right above the authorship and copyright. Brilliantly Stated Omissions of Hatred. Strikes a chord in me and I'm not sure why. I'm sure it'll stay with me though.
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