This is a beautiful piece. I am a believer and my faith is strong, so I really enjoyed reading your words describing the Savior who came to give us life. As I get older I find that I turn to Him more and more as well. I realize that I have had His gentle protection all through my life, even if I didn't see it at the time. This is a very honorable tribute.
As a passionate person I was caught up in this great poem rather quickly. For a moment I was that woman, needing to be desired, wanting to have love. I have been in that place that you so well described. This poem really spoke to me.
The romantic in me was right there with you on the forest floor. I could feel every nuance of this poem and my imagination took flight. Simple yet beautiful. Well done.
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