Very very nice!!!!!!!!! Beautifully written and it flows so well!!!!!
Good subject, and I especially love the third and fourth stanza.
I also like how it seems like its ended but then comes in again with the real ending. Adds a bit of intrigue to the poem.
Overall it is a great poem and very well done!!
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