BillK, This is beautiful. I can totally relate to your keeping distance from the door. Sometimes we spoil something that appears perfect from a distance by coming too close and knowing too much.
Though I know I do not have any knowledge about this, I would have liked the word "scented" instead of "perfumed" as it goes with the flow of the poem. And to me, "perfume" seems to mean something synthetic or artificial.
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