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Huristic

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Review of HAPPINESS

Review by Huristic

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

lovely to see somebody who is happy in their own skin. beautiful inspirational words. This is the sort of thing everybody should read when they need to give their life a boost. Bravo, keep up the positivity

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Review of Headed for a Cliff

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Nice rhyming piece although I found it a little obscure in places... doesn't detract from the piece overall, it is well rounded and has a definite beginning and end.

"cast in stone I duly lay" I find difficult to understand in the context of the poem... perhaps you could help me?

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Review of A Sunday to Start March

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

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A wonderful Tour-De-Force of an ordinary family Sunday, full of delicious little intimate details.Told in a simple but persuasive voice. It almost feels voyeuristic! At times I felt as if I was actually in the room with them.

Just a couple of points: ... I'm trying to understand grammar better... sounds rather clumsy. I would suggest ... I would like to broaden my knowledge of grammar..

I assume "collins" is the author or publisher of the book, in which case it is a proper noun and requires a capital C. It should have an apostrophe between the n and s (Collin's) because it is a possessive case.

Finally, and please forgive my ignorance but what is " making mustard gas"?

please remember this is my opinion only.

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Review of Prayer to Danu

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Interesting formation for a poem dedicated to your diety. Reads well, full of emotion, I can feel your desire to write the best you can.

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Review of How to be special

Review by Huristic

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Beautiful allegory based around the game of chess. As a chess player myself I find this story origional and very amusing. You havbe great imagination! Nurture it.