this is a sudden and poorly written ending. I hope whoever is managing this interactive now replaces or deletes it as written in the rules they laid out at the start.
I know the story's old but it has so much potential and so many unfinished chapters. If your out of ideas ask the community, but if you just don't want to update it yourself then you are wasting your creativity and just leaving a started project to collect dust. The main thing you could do to improve it overall is just make one complete rout begging to end.
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