Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Your descriptive work easily took the reader there in the scene and the movement throughout kept my attention.
You captured the true dynamics of sibling differences combined with the love of a parent whilst trying to resolve a difficult decision. I was pleased that you included Mutley, especially at the end.
I really liked the ending.
Well done.
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