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Review by Rolf Halfhearted Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)
Excellent story overall. I like it. Honestly, there's a lot you can do with it, although I do think there's not much room for drawn-out conflict. If your readers develop the characters a lot, it could become a great piece if you want to make it into a regular story.
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