Absolutly beautiful.
You captured me right away with the tender, soft tone and the amazing descriptive words. I believe I held my breath through the entire read.
Thank you for the touching story.
-- toni--
Great story. I love how you incorporated Poe's poem into your story. The intwined passeges enhanced the story.
I enjoyed escaping into the childhood holiday through an old soul's eyes.
Thanks for the great read.
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