Nicely written details and I am no cook. I don't like goulash but a rye bread sandwich sounds good. Grandpa and his grandson in-law comlering who could eat the fastest. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Time plays a big role in our life. Nature makes for a good topic. Some well chosen words and a good scenario. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A few words convey a good message. The last line. We do survive. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little girl thinks stupid means soup and rude is red. She is four years and learning. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I am not a great cook but I do enjoy putting seasoning in soup. I enjoy making potato soup. The cook in this poem is really into this. Good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A egg cup. A spoon. The poor egg cup is a sir and is confused about his antics. A good style and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. I appreciate the humor in this. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate deer hunting. This deer family. A kind man let's the deer family live. Some good reflections and neat scenario. I held my breath reading this. A nice style and I loved the ending. A deer family free to live. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Nature's bountiful. Disasters. Problems. Good descriptions. A good choice of words. A neat scenario. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we forget some men live at sea and it is their life. The navy. A person is bound for a few years. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful with neat imagery. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love seems to change over the years you're with the same person but ot also matures and you get used to things. Changes happen. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a delightful flair. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Ovi Positor. This is a new poetry format. Wwll, new to me. A good style and the words fall into place nicely. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest . A cool rhyme pattern sums this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow a serenade in a foreign language then in American. Good call. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Hopeful in the evening to talk about feelings. Wanting to sing to a person. Nice style. Pretty serenade. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A doll maker. His last doll. He put a lot of love and care into making his last doll. Creative and colorful with a good imagination. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a delightful flair. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good descriptions of a erupting volcano. Some good drama and suspense. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The poor dog. He made it, too. Other animals being chased by a grizzly but he was probably scared of the volcano as well. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and flies in the winter don't belong. I hate when a fly gets in my Doll Room. I don't get them very often. Flies do like fruits. Hiding the fruit is a good idea. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow Opherin sounds spooky and serious. This holds the reader's interest. Some good descriptions and good warnings. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I would stay away from her and this cave. A good scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and these witches seem like fun inspired of the one that just wants tricks and refuses to give out candy unless she gets tricks. They turn into animals and are able to get the Trick Er Treaters to change into their characters they are costumed as. Well rounded characters and enlightening. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, forever doesn't mean forever to other people. A good style and views to support the forever therapy. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Some good reflections and some sad ones. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Looks like we live life by the seat of our pants. A good style and well chosen words. Looks before you leap. Get a good night's sleep. Seize the day. Words to live by. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Live a Godly life. It's hard but we try. These are words of wisdom and words to live by. Spiritual. This is enlightening, inspiring and uplifting. A good devotional. Creative and your devotion to God and Jesus shows. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Jake the Bull frog. Poor guy was handicapped. He won the swimming contest and got the girl program he wanted. A good style and easy to follow. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sadly, snowmen don't last forever. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A nice plan. Poor kids. A good style and looks like this was fun to write. Creative and colorful. A mushy brown snowman. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a young girl looking in her vanity mirror. Thinking about bad things in life. Thinking of The Monkees sing Mary. I can relate. She thinks she is dreaming and then realizes she misses her mother. My mother died a few months back. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I like the orange type you used for autumn. A good style and lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Autumn gives us all kinds of vibes. This holds the reader's interest. Well defined. A salute to Autumn. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Having fun. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love's eternal. Don't be gloomy. Talent being a great trick. Being thankful. Words to live by. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
It is nice to meet a person you can relate to. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. A friendly smile. A sincere person. A new friend. Lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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