Nicely written details and a good word flow. Animals and pets are beautiful and we need them. I love my kitty. She bounces around all over. I get it about your dog. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words. Good reflections. Sounds beautiful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and table manners. Cooties. Passing gas. Some good humor here. Creative and colorful. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A nice conversation. This holds the reader's interest. Grandma blaming the dog. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a bad leprechaun. I am glad he didn't kill the mother sheep or her baby. Erie and spooky. Looks like you spent time with this. An interesting character. A good use of word prompts. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a ghost isn't always a person that loved before. A ghost can be a thing of the past. A good style and easy to relate to. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and sums this up with a nice flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Courage. We need courage to het through life and the world has a lot of problems. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I don't like mice. The children captured them in humane traps and released them to the park. A good style with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Tge children grew up and started a pet shop that included mice. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Signal lost. It is awful when the internet breaks down. I panic when this happens. A good style and easy to follow and relate to. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow . Poisedons Musique. A Chunese poem. I enjoyed reading the explanation of what thus poem is about. A good format. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style. A few words sat a lot. Good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I love poetry but I would rather do short stories. I feel I express myself through short stories. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I always call Ravens and crows Edgar. Edgar Allan Poe. Nicely written details and a green crow. I love it. Well rounded characters, the farmer and the crow. Creative and colorful. Looks like this was fun to write. I had to smile. A good presentation. Always " Megan
Nicely written details and I am no cook. I don't like goulash but a rye bread sandwich sounds good. Grandpa and his grandson in-law comlering who could eat the fastest. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Time plays a big role in our life. Nature makes for a good topic. Some well chosen words and a good scenario. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A few words convey a good message. The last line. We do survive. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little girl thinks stupid means soup and rude is red. She is four years and learning. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I am not a great cook but I do enjoy putting seasoning in soup. I enjoy making potato soup. The cook in this poem is really into this. Good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A egg cup. A spoon. The poor egg cup is a sir and is confused about his antics. A good style and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. I appreciate the humor in this. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate deer hunting. This deer family. A kind man let's the deer family live. Some good reflections and neat scenario. I held my breath reading this. A nice style and I loved the ending. A deer family free to live. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Nature's bountiful. Disasters. Problems. Good descriptions. A good choice of words. A neat scenario. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we forget some men live at sea and it is their life. The navy. A person is bound for a few years. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful with neat imagery. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love seems to change over the years you're with the same person but ot also matures and you get used to things. Changes happen. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a delightful flair. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Ovi Positor. This is a new poetry format. Wwll, new to me. A good style and the words fall into place nicely. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest . A cool rhyme pattern sums this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow a serenade in a foreign language then in American. Good call. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Hopeful in the evening to talk about feelings. Wanting to sing to a person. Nice style. Pretty serenade. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A doll maker. His last doll. He put a lot of love and care into making his last doll. Creative and colorful with a good imagination. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a delightful flair. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good descriptions of a erupting volcano. Some good drama and suspense. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The poor dog. He made it, too. Other animals being chased by a grizzly but he was probably scared of the volcano as well. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and flies in the winter don't belong. I hate when a fly gets in my Doll Room. I don't get them very often. Flies do like fruits. Hiding the fruit is a good idea. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow Opherin sounds spooky and serious. This holds the reader's interest. Some good descriptions and good warnings. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I would stay away from her and this cave. A good scenario. Always: Megan
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