This is extremely good. Well written, it plays with the mind a bit. The discriptions given help the reader to form a picture of the scene in their head adding to the overall effect of the poem. It leaves a lingering feeling and still makes you think about it long after it has been read, whih is the effect all authors should aim for.
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