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Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (4.5)
Amazing detail, perfect feeling, and the picture helps paint the scene through your head of what is really going on. Very interesting my friend to say the bitter least, and I think it was worth reading. I can't think of much that you could hugely use to improve on, but just keep practising to get better and better, some points are greater at detail than others, etc. I'd say you're a decent writer and I'll also add the simple and annoying "Great job! I like it!" to end this up. Nice.
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