The accent added to this poem is a nice delight. Imagery of a gentle misunderstood winter, the solace of a lonely short lived show flake, each so different from the likeness to which they are grouped. The ocean and the empty seashell. A good poem about (I think) loneliness and being alone. Well edited, provided link helpful.
Thoughts. What we see, differs to each and everyone of us, no two see the same and that's just not vision differences. Creative, somewhat misleading but intentional. To ponder on what could be beyond the words on the page is mystic. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed.
So relatable. Thanks. There's a lot that can be said for those who have no friends, yet are happy being alone. Small things, and perhaps a few work friends or family can be the mental fix for long term loneliness. That internal war insides ourselves is real and daily. Each small "micro" task compounds to make us better. This is ll of this, well written, and as I said, relatable. Thanks for reminding me, I am not alone.
Random Review Thoughts SanguineAngelLink might like you, I remember you from a few visits. I hope this is drama, its small but so impactful, I think too for others that struggle also, though the human mind makes us believe we're alone. Into the wind, the sound gets taken away, will anyone hear? Suggestive.
Goodness Random Review time, fyn-21 wdc years and writing! and I adore the imagery used, so dark I could hardly see. Well written, flow is spot on. I wasn't sure where you were going in the beginning but found our fast and delighted. "Maggot moments" Older poem, well edited, a lot of fun to read despite its grim subject matter. Thanks and happy Account.
What is mine, yours, ours, theirs? Creative and suggests at so many questions. A look at an unhealthy relationship. Not full of impactful imagery, just questions to let the reader absorb. Thank you, and no suggestions for any change.
Lyrics, and thanks for the provided links. Relationships are complicated. and this has imagery to that effect. Creative and well written, a little moody and dark. I enjoyed and have no suggestions just thoughts. Thanks for sharing.
Morning, Random Review, Little Me has Thoughts I wanna share.
I won't say anything negative in these crazy times, but very well written, stirring many feeling about what we do as countries to others from other countries. Sad times indeed. Thanks, Redtowrite for sharing and the superb editing and the note to the lyrics used.
The image of "vintage" really has changed and you captured that change smack on of classic cars, those impactful trucks and cars of a quieter time. Reminds me of what I get when I search. Thank you allowing me to read. No suggestions.
Good day, Tim ChiuRandom review again, older poem.
Creative, inclusive. Somewhat romantic. I enjoyed the pirate theme throughout, adds some entertainment, almost musical feel. A storytelling in poetry form, bright, thrilling, full of feelings. Doing what you love on land in the sea. Again, creative. Thanks for letting me share my thoughts. I enjoyed.
Great flash fiction. I thought something else totally as I'm sure was your intent. Great dialogue, I could add some imagery to the two people, although none was given, just good conversation. Enjoyed, and have no suggestions. Suggestive and a little steamy.
Well done! Random review brought me,
Dark, somewhat, very small, but lingers invites the reader to perhaps more, but not to be. I enjoy misleading poems, how my mind things of imagery not to happen, and I'm left in wonder at my mistake, and the writer's intent.
Creative, even with its tiny size. No errors. As I've said well done.
Warm Regards, Little StaiNed
Glitter adds so much bling and postivity. "sorry for spelling" Google eyes do the same, I have them on a cactus. I see no errors, very well done, and not something I usually. Thanks for a little sparkle in my darkness.
Cute, well written, simple in its imagery, not overlaying and over intense in feelings. An easy read. Winter isn't for everyone, Summer isn't either. If I had a choice I'd pick Winter and no fireplace for me. Thanks for sharing, hope Random Review picks it up for me people.
Random Review/Thoughts time, and I'm struggling with the site changes so bear with me.
Good day, Tim ChiuI remember being here before.
Very heartwarming poem, well edited I see no puncutation errors, although I'll leave many spelling errors, To find someone to love that deeply is a blessing itself. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks here is my five.
Random review/Thoughts, I'm back again, Emberly Gray I remember my last visit.
Wow! So relatable, as I imagine many many people as this prose describes. Somewhat say, feeling defeated. Sharing is powerful and I hope it helped shedding some of those icky voices that tell us lies, shows us lies, we are all loved. Powerful, and moving such a sad path. Thanks honestly, to you and Random Review link, I am out of my comfort.
Good day, David the Dark one! Random review/Thoughts time and Little me does not fear the dark. Nice story, not overall creepy but interesting in its delivery. We don't know what came in from the snow. I assume the person is a older child, from some dialogue choices. Great inner turmoil. Almost like a dream. Or a memory. Reminds me of a recent movie. Weapons. Thank you for sharing and the chance to read it. I enjoyed.
Grief does not go away indeed. You never get used to it, and as time passes those memories will cling. I too lost someone very special to me, and can relate to what you shared in this essay. I believe some people try to help but often does not work out. Just one day at a time, and remember the moments.
Thank you sharing, I hope it helped. Little StaiNed
Goodness! How sad this is. I would hope its not an experience, but if so oh my how heartbreaking, clinical depression. I mean its rewarding to share, to know others feel and hear those mean voices that hurt our hearts. Things can be bad, and this well written poem hits that smack on.
Well done! So relatable as we all have experienced similar in some way. Great small humor despite the settling angry of the bird. Honestly I liked this, so good. Thanks, no suggestions so here a five. Have a great day.
Morning, Random review time, I remember you as I visit quite often. Emberly Gray
Well done, a bit melodramatic, misunderstood, hurt, lack of caring, a lot is said in this simple yet effective. I imagine being in a abusive relationship and just closing up and accepting it. Well done. Thanks!
Gosh! This is totally awesome, so much out of my dark comfort zone but so wonderfully do and paced. Who indeed, this makes so much sense is its silly and melodramatic tone, or least what the voice was in my head, I'm smiling from ear to ear this is just so good. Full five, my dark friends agree.
Random Review time, Little me is visiting, Anna Marie Carlson Entry for contest, I imagine a prompt provided. A self reflection, perhaps excuses, we mentally make to avoid expectations. No offence meant. Well written, no imagery, just cold hard realism about our minds today. No errors, thanks.
Ta La La Vampire, and I re watched Nosferatu again a few day ago. As soon as you started I knew it just had that kind of feel. A great random review for me as I don't think I would of found this on my own. Simple vivid imagery, yet quiet in it feelings, but spot on. Thank you. I only suggest each stanza start with a capital, easy peasy.
Good day, ridinghhood-p.boutilier after some fighting with random review I found your poem. Dreaming and changing what a unique thought, creative indeed. East to follow, to understand and made me kind of hopeful as to what I would dream if I actually did. Thanks, for the chance to read it.
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Vampire, and I re watched Nosferatu again a few day ago. As soon as you started I knew it just had that kind of feel. A great random review for me as I don't think I would of found this on my own. Simple vivid imagery, yet quiet in it feelings, but spot on. Thank you. I only suggest each stanza start with a capital, easy peasy.