That was a beautiful script and I would like to say well done on a good job. Heres hoping to see this at a film festival.I didnt have any problem with it and it was one of the greatest pieces of romance I have ever read and you have nothing to worry about as the characters were very believable and everything just worked together.
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/southkid
Generated in 0.06 seconds at 1:53pm on Mar 16, 2026 via server WEBX1.
un: 
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Community Feed
Puzzle Hub
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
