Wow. That was a really great tale. I can't wait to see th rest of this, which is obviously available. I loved some of the descriptions that you included, it was detailed and deep in every sentence. The story sounds has gotten off to a great start, but it seemed a little slow at the beginning, what with all the necessary exposition. The bane of all writers seeking depth, no doubt!
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