It contains some really good imagery. From experience with using Star Wars to escape, I can tell how much it's means to you and that this is a personal thought poem. The second stanza is decently well written, it has the relation that some poems need for the connection from writer to reader. All together, I think that the poem is really good.
Keep writing,
Sowen
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