I greatly enjoyed this. It does a perfect job of portraying life after a sudden breakup, the mind trying to forget but the heart won't let it. The last stanza made it a 5-star effort. Awesome! I'm gonna read more of your stuff for sure, assuming they're all as good as this!
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