Perfect! As I read your work I could actually see in my own little mind what was going on. Not only did you show me but told me a great story in poetic form. Not a thing would or could I change. I imagine myself reading it in card form with music coming from inside the card. I am truly humming now. Thanks for inspiring me.
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