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Review by sileas451 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I gave this a four because it was a really interesting read. I liked your ideas, and I felt fascinated yet repulsed by it as I read it. I think that perhaps your writing skills need to be polished a little - your paragraphs are too short and should be condensed. Other than that though I thought this was a really interesting piece of work.
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