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Review of The Holy Temple  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Spiritual Dawning,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about you love for God and how anxious you are to join Him. I want to meet and be close with God. I hope I enjoy my life and then enjoy my eternity with Him. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Kare,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety and resentment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why the speaker didn't want to be saved. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man is disappointed and resentful that his wife saved him when he almost died. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi sindbad,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic by sharing your emotional state at the time you wrote the piece with the reader. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the topic. They will read to the last word. You have laid out your goals for 2022. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style what is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Elora,

This is a fantastic prologue. The prologue opens shock as a body drops suddenly to the ground. The reader is wondering who has been killed and will read on to the find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the prologue. You have captured all the reader's attention with extreme danger and the main character trying to get away. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The main character's captor speaks like a real person. The prologue is well paced. It is fast paced, and this keeps the reader rapidly following along to see what will happen to the main character next. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Review of The House of Dunn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi GhostlyPotato,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Frank will find anything unusual in the house he is about to explore. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a paranormal investigator who is exploring a house reportedly connected with a double murder. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of The Passenger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Scare-emy,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with nervousness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what John's first subway trip will be like. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man takes the subway for the first time, with unusual results. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Blue,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I don't take part in poetry contests a lot, but I always read the guidelines to see what is involved. I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written an announcement for a Christmas Poetry contest. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi MINAHILHAROON,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Emily will find what she needs in "Mirrors and Mystics". They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who goes into an antique shop trying to buy a gift but gets a terrifying surprise instead. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Emily, and she comes across as a real person. There is only one line of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. Mr. Blackwood speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Scribbleeba,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a day you started rather slowly with little enthusiasm. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a person. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)I tried to push myself out of my blanket but-There should be a comma after "blanket".

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rafa,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your insight about life. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Fright Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Anarchist Angel,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about Halloween Night and all the activity that goes on then. I remember loving Halloween as a kid. When I moved to my current town we didn't get any trick or treaters on our lane. I always watch the Halloween movie series, though. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi chuckles,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem reminds us that we have to rely on God and each other more. I have a deep faith in God and love being loving to other people. We all share this world. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Mary,

This is a wonderful piece. The title makes a direct statement and home and God. The reader is anxious to find out your thoughts about the details of this statement and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about praying together in your home as a family. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)and mu home-Should read "and my home"

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Sanctuary  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi NormaJean,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how hard it will be for Sally and Mike to adjust to their new home. They will read to the last place to find out. The story is about a couple who settles on a strange planet after Earth becomes uninhabitable. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)Earth is no long a viable option.-"long" should be "longer".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Winter's Blessing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Vera,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is tinged with annoyance and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the woman in the story will alright by herself during the snowfall. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who decides to go for a walk on a day where everything seems to be going wrong. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention.


1)"I don't know- I could be dying, but I don't feel a thing. What are you, and can I go home?", she asked. "I shall not tell you my true name, but I am the one who gave you more snow. And yes, I will take you back.", he replied. "You're the one who did it? I- why, you nearly froze me, along with the entire village! Why would-" "I thought you wanted it."
And the snow stopped falling.-This paragraph needs to be broken up into paragraphs to account for the two pieces of dialogue.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Anetra,

This is a wonderful piece. The tone is full of anticipation and cautious joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why the speaker has had such a hard time during their life. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about someone who has found the person they feel they can rely on while they move into a better phase in their life. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece concentrates on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a couple of places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The piece is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about God's love and how it will change us and the world we live in. I believe that belief in God is what we need to make our lives better. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Prose Poetry poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It s a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi JSeanAuthor,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of confusion and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why Archie decided to take his own life. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man who is grieving the death of his life partner who has committed suicide. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on James, and he comes across as a real person. The dialogue is well done and realistic. James speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you neglected to put commas before coordinating conjunctions. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi thesadbath,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and direct at the same time. The reader knows that they will be reading about how sad music makes you feel but not why that is. They will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about how listening to sad music makes you feel. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Like A Glove  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ElytBlank,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about everything that love is. I have found that love is all that and more. Different kinds of love mean different things and do different things to you. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Palisade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Howl-fyn,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about keeping a close eye toward your behavior when the gods are involved. I am wondering if the speaker has done something to anger the gods. I read to the last word to see if this was the case. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Her Smile  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Serena,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of nervousness and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if there is something wrong with Sarah. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man suspects that there is something strange about his girlfriend. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of DREAMS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi anonymous,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with discontent. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how we dream of our future as we grow up. I had many dreams as a child, and I am still trying to make them come true. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of A Soul is Seeking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi JSeanAuthor,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem takes a look at homelessness and its effects. I have a roof over my head and food on the table and will do anything to help those who don't have these basic necessities. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation here, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of A Boy and his Dog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ScaryBee,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a boy who wakes up to find that his dog can talk. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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