drgn_kpr's (shearer) Reviews

drgn_kpr

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#4315036

Review of My Life

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Very well expressed and visualized. Thank you sharing. Well done.

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#4307644

Review of What have I done?

Review by drgn_kpr

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

It amazes me when an author can tell a story so completely in so few words. Sorry for the lose that inspired this tragically beautiful thought. Pease be with you.

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#4296610

Review of Economy Class

Review by drgn_kpr

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

That is good stuff. On a personal note, I flew for 20 years. I can't bring myself to fly now. You covered the reasons well.

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#4296061

Review of (Two) Minds of My Own

Review by drgn_kpr

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)

Very interesting and with some work entertaining. Adding a setting, maybe a break room where the ideas (personas) can move in and out, interact. Or passing each other in a hallway, even a train platform any place with movement.

If you stick with the play concept add none speaking characters moving around to keep the allusion of activity going.

The personas can be represented with more characteristics to individualise each idea as a separate character.

This could easily be a skit or one act play. Keep playing with the idea. The basic premise is sound.