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Review by Shawnte Barr Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
Your story is coming along good I think you need to go back and add some scene and some more imagery in it. You have good dialogue, but some tags you should work on like: you can just put _____said instead of something like ________ said again. You have to make every word count. It does get a little confusing in some spots so you need to go back and fix those.
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