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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I liked the premise as someone who reads science-fiction. The beginning is interesting and solid in terms of tone, style and pacing. The use of spacing is a bit 'off' I would say, consider why you make a new paragraph each time usually each paragraph should be distinct. Like if the subject, tone or mood changes then a new paragraph is ideal.

Otherwise, I really enjoyed it! If you write any sci-fi again, I'd definitely check it out.
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