Above average in many respects. It's a great writing style that makes the reader continue reading the poem through little narrative hooks in every stanza. I did not understand the reference to fur, and i even reread it in the hopes of somehow understanding, but it simply did not come to me. Maybe I'm too tired. Anyways, great work. Hope this helps a bit. ^_^
I love T.S. Elliot, and I lvoe this poem, so amazingly true. My favorite line was "Elminate comprehensions and spread ourselves across the sky." another thing I enjoyed were the painting references. I thought it was an original poem that gets a 4.5 out of 5 from me great job.
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