Sent from heaven to home. Great plot to this, and it is not as simple as the words profess. Nice rhyme, nice rhythm. When a fable or a tale like this is used in poetry, it becomes humorous to a point, but only to a point. I think this had that sense of things in it. Lots of luck at the Convention. Best Regards.
This is a great and unique poem. I thought I had it figured out until the last line. Perhaps, I am too easy to please, all those great soaking lines that really give you the pleasure of a good author, yet, I suppose, the last few lines suffice. Great Read. Thanks for sharing it with us in the Author Newsletter. Best Regards.
A very loving tribute to a really sad moment of truth in a bride's mind. War is hell, I think I know what you mean. You have placed this poem in a good setting to show the emotions of a woman in love torn with the consequences of war. I liked it. Really good read. Best Regards.
Such a good winner. I tried this one and "flunked". You have a great grasp of longer lines in the acrostic. This particular poem seeks justice for the landscape we see, and you did well on the "prompt". I liked it alot. Best Regards.
I would like to give this poem a better rating,
because it shows a true attitude of what the subject matter is--women, war, tribulation. I liked the title and your "woman" was very intriquing, almost quite real. Your lines might do with a little more meter, shaping up the poem. Best Regards.
I would like to give this poem more support, because of it's subject matter, the theme, the attitude. I really liked your attempt to put such romantic words into a poem, and to have given us a picture of your age, is ageless! Best Regards.
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