Seawitch's (seawitch) Reviews

A wonderful story told in rhyme and meter. It's open ended conclusio left me looking over my shoulder and I might need a night light tonight. Very well done!

Write on.
Artanisa, Witch of the Sea

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Review of Please Don't Pass Me By

Review by Seawitch

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Dear Sum1,

I found this item listed on Carol St.Ann's favorites page, and the more I read over there, the luckier I feel to have an item of mine there too.
This poem of yours is very touching. It tells of online friendship that has fallen off, leaving one of the friends desolate and confused at the probable loss of the other.
It speaks to me as it must to many others. For me, though my online friend and I are still in contact, life changes and things bring about a distance once thought unfathomable. Still that person meant a lot at a certain time, in a certain way. Nothing can change that.
Thank you for sharing.

Artanisa, Witch of the Sea

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Review of Dear Baby,

Review by Seawitch

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Oh, how beautiful.

Thank you for sharing your heart song to your unborn baby. I would suggest no corrections even if I could; it's a sacred thing. SOmething your precious little one will carry forever. Your words should never be changed to suit literary guidelines or the poetic sensitivities of outsiders.

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Review of Gabriel Byrne: TVs Sweet Treat

Review by Seawitch

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Another wonderful piece of prose, Carol. I really like the way you present your ideas in a comfortable down to earth way. I feel like you wrote this to me. A mark of a good writer. On another note. I also am a fan of Gabriel Byrne!

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Review of A Reviewer's Sigh

Review by Seawitch

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

This is a great poem. I hope to be a good reviewer and a poet worthy of a poem such as this.