This poem has a really good rhythm especially in the first two stanzas.
I thought there was one line that seemed to distrupt the flow:
Not knowing how to escape, we persevere.
I thought the poem was very insightful and thoughtful.
I feel that I can really relate to this poem as I'm in the middle of a career change.
Thanks for sharing!
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