This is a wonderful haiku. One can picture the wind teasing and interacting with the trees, almost pleading with them to let go of their inhibitions and move with the music that she makes. You have a great way of presenting the idea so that the reader can see the action of the haiku. You make me want to read more haiku, and newer writers of haiku generally do not do that! Keep writing the wonderful haiku!
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