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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "In nature
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This poem, "In Nature", is another brilliant poem by the poet Bodhisatwa Parekh. The poem recalls a serene and divine atmosphere, inviting the readers to explore a world beyond the actual. The imagery of a "shimmer" followed by "stillness" suggests a moment of tranquillity, where the natural elements come together in harmony. The phrase "colour breath" indicates a colourful yet unseen reality, hinting at a deeper connection to nature that exceeds our earthly experiences.

The use of "silent light" and "soft as moss" creates a gentle, tactile quality, stressing the poem's focus on subtle sensations rather than overthinking actions. This choice of language fosters a sense of peace and reflectio, encouraging the readers to reflect on their relationship with the natural world.

The mention of air that "tastes of ozone and rain that never falls" introduces a contradiction, suggesting a longing for renewal and the essence of life that is present yet unfulfilled. This imagery remembers a feeling of anticipation and reflection, as if the environment is on the threshold of transformation.

Finally, the "quiet hum" signifies a collective memory of existence, where the world is portrayed as a living entity that is aware of itself. This concept of self-awareness in nature adds a philosophical layer to the poem, inviting consideration on the interconnectedness of all life.

Overall, the poet's poem beautifully captures the essence of nature through detailed imagery and imaginative themes, encouraging readers to appreciate the wonders that exist beyond the surface of everyday life.


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"The Break of Dawn: A Spaceship Embarks" is another beautiful poem by the poet Tim Chiu. This poem presents an exploration of space and humanity's relationship with the cosmos.
The poem begins with a view of Earth as a cockpit, filled with colourful imagery of "orbital sugars" and "fiery garlics," suggesting a blend of the extraordinary and interesting. This juxtaposition focuses on the beauty and complexity of our planet, set against the backdrop of the vast universe.

The poet's use of telescopic beams and the "brilliant photos" idea of discovery and the quest for knowledge beyond our immediate surroundings. The poem also captures the essence of cosmic intelligence, suggesting that the universe is not only vast but also filled with humour spectacular life and wisdom. This concept of spectacular life forms and their stories is strengthened through references to "storybook legends" and the "proof of sentient life form," stressing the interconnectedness of all beings.

The imagery of interstellar "horse heads" and "valiant and weathered rivulets" carries a sense of adventure and resilience, as humanity moves toward the challenging direction of existence.

The poem also reflects on the role of humanity in the grand scheme of the universe, portraying a sense of responsibility and creativity in shaping our destiny. The "connective quotient" and "authentic grammar" suggest a deep understanding of our place in the cosmos, urging the readers to appreciate the beauty and purpose of co-creation.

Ultimately, the poem celebrates the awareness of the planet and its appreciation for the universe's presence. It invites the readers to recognize the potential for collaboration and innovation, highlighting the "gritty, exceptional beauty" that arises from our collective efforts. The poet's work is a touching reminder of the heavy relationship between humanity and the cosmos, encouraging a sense of wonder and gratitude for the journey of exploration.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "Nature And Us
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"Nature And Us," is another eight-line poem by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. He invites the readers to embrace a slower but steady pace in our lives, stressing the beauty found in nature's small wonders.

This poem opens with a gentle reminder to take time and appreciate the details, such as dewdrops and the edges of leaves, rather than rushing through life. This call to mindfulness encourages readers to fully experience the richness of their surroundings.

The imagery of soft moss and a personal trail suggests that each individual's journey is unique and should be appreciated. The poet underlines the importance of patience, likening it to sunshine that nurtures growth and understanding.

Overall, the poem serves as a heart-touching reflection on the value of slowing down, urging us to connect more deeply with nature and ourselves. Through its serene tone and detailed imagery, the poem effectively carries a message of mindfulness and thankfulness for the present moment.


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This poem explores the heart-touching and eternal struggle between good and evil, reflecting on the interconnectedness of existence and the cyclical nature of life and death.

The imagery is rich and suggestive, illustrating a cosmic perspective where the narrator feels both a part of the universe and an observer of its vastness. The use of symbols, such as becoming "asteroid shrapnel" and "footprints ahead," stresses the transient yet impactful nature of individual lives within the grand tapestry of time.

The poem furthermore digs into themes of identity and belonging, suggesting that the essence of the narrator is interlinked with the universe and the lives of others. The references to natural elements like oceans, lightning, and trees create a detailed backdrop that enhances the emotional weight of the narrative. The duality of being "nailed to the sky" while "chained to the earth" captures the tension between aspiration and reality, focusing on the struggle inherent in the human experience.

Ultimately, this poem carries a sense of continuity and rebirth, suggesting that life is a series of moments where the past and future converge. The closing lines strengthen the idea that the essence of others lives on within us, creating a powerful connection that transcends time and space. This exploration of existence, identity, and the eternal battle between good and evil echoes deeply, inviting the readers to reflect on their place within the universe.


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Review of Me and nature  
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The poem, "Me and Nature", is an excellent creation by the poet Sindbad. This poem explores the heart-touching relationship between the self and the natural world, themes of existence, love, and the transient nature of life. It poses existential questions about the possibility of living a fulfilling life, filled with love and experiences, while acknowledging the inevitability of loss and the passage of time. The imagery of diverse landscapes, such as the ghats of Varanasi and the Arctic lights, evokes a sense of wanderlust and the desire for connection with the world.

The poem reflects on life's challenges, suggesting that it demands both the best and worst from individuals, ultimately reducing them to a state of nothingness. This notion of being left with only memories, tears, and the remnants of experiences highlights the fragility of human existence. The metaphor of dust symbolises the impermanence of life, while the "geometry of haze" represents the complexities of navigating right and wrong.

Sindbad articulates a sense of being caught in a liminal space, where identity and existence blur. The speaker identifies as a person without a name or history, through the universal struggle of individuals to find meaning in internal chaos.

This poem concludes with a reflection on hope and the potential for renewal, suggesting that even after despair, there is an opportunity to start anew.

Overall, this poem captures the essence of human experience and its beauty, challenges, and the quest for understanding in a world that often feels overwhelming. It invites readers to contemplate their own place within the intricate tapestry of life and nature.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "How To Blow
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{b} "How To Blow" is another artistic creation by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem recalls a sense of introspection and exploration through its vivid imagery and emotional resonance.

The opening lines introduce a tactile experience with a "smooth, wooden thing" that fits comfortably in the narrator's palm, suggesting a connection to an instrument, likely a wind instrument. This sets the stage for a new journey into sound and silence.

This poem captures a moment of stillness with the phrase "A single note; no bird could sing," indicating the uniqueness and the power of the sound that it produced.

The imagery of the wind ceasing to breathe enhances the atmosphere, suggesting a heart-touching impact of the note that transcends natural sounds. This moment of silence and focus invites the readers to consider the significance of sound in their lives.

As the poem progresses, the "forgotten door" symbolises new opportunities or paths that may be unexplored. The teller's uncertainty about where it leads reflects a common human experience of venturing into the unknown. The concluding line, "I only know how to blow again," conveys a sense of resilience and the cyclical nature of creation. It suggests that despite uncertainty, the act of producing sound. It is expressing oneself and that remains a fundamental and instinctive response.

Overall, he poets poem is a meditation on the interplay between sound, silence, and the journey of self-discovery. It invites the readers to reflect on their own experiences with creativity and the courage to embrace the unknown. The simplicity of the language combined with rich imagery creates a powerful emotional landscape, making the poem both accessible and thought-provoking. {/b}


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Review of Daily Cascade  
for entry "Keeping to the Light
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This log post entry reflects on the symbolical connection between the resilience of plants and the inner strength of humans. It suggests that just as plants endure harsh conditions while retaining the essence of sunlight, people also possess an inherent greatness and hope that allows them to navigate life's challenges. The blogger tresses that despite facing disappointment and hardship, there is a quiet strength within individuals that remembers joy, kindness, and love.

The concept of resilience is central to the discussion, focusing on that while life is imperfect and unpredictable, humans have the capacity to heal and rise again. This resilience is likened to the way plants strive toward sunlight, driven by faith, courage, creativity, and purpose. The blog post plays the symbolic role of past experiences, such as love and guidance from family and mentors, in shaping one's ability to manage and flourish.

Ultimately, the author expresses a strong belief in the resilience of humanity, underscoring the hopeful message that individuals can overcome adversity and continue to grow, regardless of the challenges they face. This viewpoint serves as an uplifting reminder of the strength that lies within each person.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "Those Tense Moments
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"Those Tense Moments" is another artistic creation by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem nicely captures a detailed scene filled with tension and anxiety.

The imagery of dust motes dancing in the sunlight sets a serene yet fragile location, contrasting heavily with the sudden appearance of a red-eyed bull, which symbolises impending danger or chaos. The bull's presence recalls a palpable sense of anxiety among the observers, highlighting their defenselessness in the face of uncontrollable circumstances.

This poem effectively carries the communal experience of fear as the crowd watches the low thunderclap, suggesting that the tension is not just an individual feeling but a shared emotional state. The hurried passage of the bull, indifferent to the spectators, the unpredictability of life and the moments that can shift from calm to chaos in an instant. This act of taking a breath signifies a moment of indecision, recollecting the instinctual response to danger and the need to regain equilibrium internal turmoil.

Overall, this poem encapsulates the essence of tense moments in life, where tranquillity can be disrupted by unanticipated events, leaving individuals to go in the direction of their emotions in the aftermath. The comparison between the serene imagery with the raw intensity of the bull's presence creates a powerful commentary on the nature of anxiety and human stress.

In conclusion, it is a classic poem that deals with human anxiety.


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Review of Family unfolded  
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This narrative presents a deeply personal account of an individual's struggle with addiction. In this way, many complexities of family relationships. The writer reflects on the beginning realisation of a well-structured family life, contrasting it with the self-experiences of shame and isolation stemming from addiction. Despite the outward appearance of stability, the author indicates a long-standing estrangement from family members, worsened by feelings of guilt and withdrawal.

This brilliant piece stresses the misconception that addiction is merely a lifestyle choice associated with partying. Instead, it focuses on the heart-touching loneliness and emotional turmoil that accompany addiction, often leading to a sense of disconnection from others. The author shares a pivotal realisation that many household members have faced similar struggles, which fosters a sense of relief and connection. This newfound understanding allows for open communication and support, transforming the author’s perspective on their family dynamics.

The narrative concludes with a message of hope and gratefulness for the re-connection with family, underscoring the belief that shared struggles can lead to collective healing. The author expresses faith in a higher power to guide the journey, strengthening the idea that facing challenges together can foster resilience and strength. Overall, the piece serves as a heart-touching reminder of the importance of community and support in overcoming personal battles.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "That Moment
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"That Moment" is another beautiful poem by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. The poem explores a truly exciting moment for the narrator. This experience of losing balance, both physically and symbolically.

This imagery of anti-gravity movement suggests that heart-touching transformation in perception, where the familiar becomes unfamiliar, and the floor feels like a ceiling. This inversion symbolizes a moment of crisis or confusion, reflecting the complexities of navigating life's challenges.

The poet captures the sensation of dizziness, which serves as a symbol for moments of instability in life. The phrase "the world will be right again" hints at a longing for resolution and clarity after experiencing turmoil. This moment of disorientation is temporary, suggesting that while such feelings can be overwhelming, they are often fleeting and can lead to a return to equilibrium.

Overall, the poet's poem effectively carries the emotional weight of imbalance and the hope for restoration, inviting the readers to reflect on their experiences of navigating life's unpredictable twists and turns. The use of detailed imagery and a thorough tone enhances the poem's impact, making it a poignant exploration of human defenselessness and resilience.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "A Fresh, Bright Curve
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"A Fresh, Bright Curve," is another brilliant creation by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. Through this poem, the poet presents a detailed exploration of nature and growth through the symbol of a tree.

The poem begins with the imagery of a side branch that stretches towards the lightsymbolisingng new beginnings and the on of development. This imagery contrasts with the main trunk, which represents stability and strength, suggesting a balance between the established and the rising.

The poem stresses the significance of the new shoot, which "dances" and tells "a different story." This phrase focuses on the idea that new growth brings fresh viewpoints and narratives, diverging from the traditional or expected paths represented by the heartwood. The use of the term "whisper of the wood" recalls a sense of intimacy and connection with nature, suggesting that even the quieter, less substantial aspects of life hold valuable insights.

Overall, the poet's work captures the essence of renewal and the beauty of divergence in growth. The "fresh, bright curve" serves as a powerful symbol of hope and potential, inviting the readers to appreciate the subtleties of change and the stories that appear from it.

The poem ultimately celebrates the interplay between strength and fragility, exhorting a recognition of the importance of both established roots and new beginnings in the journey of life.

In conclusion, the poem mesmerised us.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "Uncertain
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"Uncertain" is another great creation by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem explores themes of vagueness and the interplay between perception and reality.

The imagery presented a striking, with edges that blur the distinction between the human and the natural world, suggesting a sense of disconnection or transformation. The description of a figure that is "not quite human" and "not even a tree" strengthens a feeling of uncertainty, inviting readers to question their understanding of identity and existence.
This is distinguished by a "tall lean dirty" presence that embodies stillness, particularly as the streetlamp fades. This comparison of light and darkness enhances the poem's atmosphere, creating a sense of waiting and anticipation. The figure's lack of a "clear face" further the theme of vagueness, suggesting that what we smell through the senses may be a mere illusion or a "trick of the light."

Overall, this poem captures a moment of stillness and reflection, encouraging the readers to reflect on the nature of perception and the complexities of existence. The use of detailed imagery and suggestive language effectively carries a sense of uncertainty, making the poem a thought-provoking exploration of the boundaries between reality and illusion.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "The Way of My Healing
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"The Way of My Healing" is another wonderful creation by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. The narrator told us how he will be again. The teller adopts an artistic way.

A serene journey unfolds where the imagery of a tranquil path beneath old oaks and a familiar bend in the river recalls a deep sense of nostalgia and comfort. The soft hum calling the narrator back echoes with a melody cherished by their heart.

In moments of daily stress, when the weight of the world presses down heavily, the narrator finds solace by closing their eyes, allowing the gentle and endless tune.

Closing his eyes, he is allowing the gentle and endless tune to flow through them. This melody serves to smooth out life's rough edges, enabling a heart-touching-touching process of healing internally the beauty of the beloved landscape that sings softly.

This poem beautifully encapsulates the remedy power of nature and the inner peace we can find in the face of life’s challenges. Within these verses, each image and sound reminds us that healing is not just a destination but a journey enriched by our surroundings and emotions. It encourages us to pause, breathe deeply, and appreciate the quiet strength offered by nature’s embrace.
Overall, it is a brilliantly written poem, displaying an intimacy with nature.

In conclusion, we find a bit of the Japanese traditional poem that deals with natural magnificence and builds a connection with human mentality. It's awesome creation.


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Review of Daily Cascade  
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This blog post stresses that learning is an essential aspect of every human for existence rather than as a job. It focuses on the historical context of learning, noting that humans have always aimed to adapt and develop knowledge in response to their environment.

The author reflects on past educational systems, which often get priority still occur through genuine understanding, yet acknowledges that learning still occurs through life experiences, even in challenging circumstances like wars.

In the contemporary context of the 21st century, the narrator points out the rapid advancements in technology, particularly in fields such as information technology, healthcare, and finance. These changes necessitated continuous learning and adaptation, as traditional employment models are being disrupted by automation and artificial intelligence. The author claims that in today's world, the ability to learn and adjust is more crucial than experience or strength, positioning adaptability as a core skill for success.

Ultimately, this blog post conveys the idea that learning is a lifelong journey, integral to survival and thriving in an ever-evolving landscape. The blogger suggests that humans are naturally designed to learn, and this process will continue endlessly, regardless of the era.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "A Bit of Compromise
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"A Bit of Compromise," is another beautifully written poem by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem explores the dynamics of a domestic relationship through the lens of a seemingly trivial disagreement about loading a dishwasher. The poem captures the essence of compromise in everyday life, illustrating how small conflicts can reflect deeper truths about partnership and communication. That is a very realistic and impressive thought. This idea gives a different shape.

The opening lines introduce the central conflict: differing opinions on how to load the dishwasher, symbolising the small hills couples often face in these types of interactions. The insistence on plates facing outward versus inward focuses on the shadows of personal preferences and the importance of individual perspectives in a shared space. This disagreement, while minor, serves as a symbol for larger relational challenges.

This poem's tone shifts to a recognition of the stalemate that arises from their differing views, stressing the co-occurrence of two truths within the confines of a small kitchen. This moment of reflection discloses the complexity of relationships, where both parties hold valid points yet struggle to find a common compromising ground. .

Ultimately, the resolution comes in the form of a compromise, resulting in a "slightly less clean pile." This outcome signifies the acceptance of imperfection in relationships, where maintaining harmony often requires yielding on certain issues. The closing sentiment, "Still friends, mostly," encapsulates the idea that despite disagreements, the bond remains intact, underscoring the importance of friendship and understanding in navigating conflicts.
Overall, the poet's poem touchingly indicates how small compromises are essential in all relationships, allowing for coexistence and mutual respect, even in the face of differing opinions. The work resonates with anyone who has experienced the delicate balance of love and disagreement, making it a relatable reflection on the nature of partnership.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "Feeling The Truth
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"Feeling The Truth" is another great eight-line poem by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh, This poem explores the contrast between external distractions and the deeper. We often overlook truths that lie beneath the surface of our experiences.

The imagery of shifting light and dancing dust motes thinks back to back to a sense of fleeting beauty, suggesting that while we are often fascinated by the immediate and louder aspects of life, there is a more profound rhythm that persists quietly in the background.

This poem stresses the importance of looking beyond the superficial noise represented by "urgent bells" to discover a steady and underlying beat that symbolises the hidden truths of existence. This duality focuses on the tension between the chaos of the external world and the calm, inner awareness that can be accessed through introspection. The concept that truth is "unseen but always felt" invites readers to reflect on their own perceptions and the deeper meanings that may be present in their lives, urging a shift in focus from the external to the internal.

Overall, Parekh's work serves as a reminder to seek out and connect with the subtle truths that inform our understanding of reality, encouraging a more mindful and contemplative approach to life.

This poem's rhythmic quality and evocative language create a meditative atmosphere, asking the readers to pause and listen to the deeper currents of the self-experiences-experiences.

Overall, the poem shows us beautiful artistry and deep thoughts.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "You and I
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"You and I" is another beautifully written poem by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. It has four rhyming cauplets. This piece nicely captures the essence of love and the connection between two individuals.

The imagery of the beloved's eyes shining "as bright as the sun" sets a warm and uplifting tone, suggesting that the presence of the loved one brings joy and brightness to the creator's life.

The phrase "my happy days have just begun" indicates a sense of renewal and optimism that love can inspire.
This poem continues to explore the theme of companionship, stressing the delight found in simple gestures, such as holding hands. This physical connection symbolises a deeper emotional bond, intimacy, where the teller feels secure and free from annoyance. This line about the heart beating faster conveys the excitement and anticipation that love brings, focusing on the transformative power of being close to someone special.

Moreover, the narrator expresses a desire for permanence in this relationship, stating that they want to stay with their love and cherish dreams together. This longing for togetherness underscores the depth of their feelings and the importance of shared aspirations in a romantic partnership.

Overall, this poem encapsulates the joy, security, and hope that love can provide, making it a heart-touching-touching tribute to the beauty of intimate relationships.
In conclusion, I must appreciate the poet's rhyming sense. The poet beautifully applies deals with the genre of romance.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "That's Life!
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"That's Life!" is another thoughtful poem that is written by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem explores the tension between external appearances and internal struggles. That often happens in our real lives. It makes the poem so interesting.

The imagery of a "painted smile" and a "wooden puppet" suggests a face that conceals deeper anxieties. This poem captures the essence of daily life, where small worries can chew at one's peace, this is the importance of simplicity and joy.

The line "It doesn't need to complicate the light" serves as a reminder that life, despite its challenges, can still be approached with a sense of playfulness and dance. Overall, the poem conveys a poignant message about embracing life's complexities while maintaining a light-hearted spirit.


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for entry "Board of Surfing
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"Board of Surfing" is another fantastic poem by the poet Jay O'Toole. This poem captures the severe and stormy experience of surfing, blending themes of struggle, regret, and the fight for existence.

The imagery of being pulled off the board by the waves a sense of helplessness and the inherent dangers of the ocean. The narrator reflects on his deep regret while confronting the powerful forces of nature, illustrating the duality of surfing as both a thrilling and scary activity.
This poem's structure carries a sense of urgency and desperation, particularly in the lines where the teller's muscles shout to "Stay Up!" This highlights the physical struggle against the waves and the emotional turmoil that accompanies the experience. The mention of barnacles slicing the skin symbolizes the harsh realities and consequences of the sport, further stressing the theme of loss and defenselessness.

As the narrator comes down into the depths, the imagery of fading hope and the struggle for breath creates a heart-touching moment of suffering.

However, this poem concludes with a powerful revival as the teller emerges from the waves, gasping for air. This moment of achievement internal adversity encapsulates the essence of surfing, an exhilarating dance with nature that can lead to both joy and hazard.

Overall, the poet's poem effectively carries the complexities of surfing, portraying it as an emblem for life's challenges and the resilience required to overcome them. The detailed imagery and emotional depth invite the readers to reflect on their struggles and the moments of clarity that can arise from them.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "THE CANVAS
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"The Canvas" is an artistic poem by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem explores the creation of a true artist, a painter.

The opening lines suggest a sense of anticipation, as the "white space" symbolises probable and the waiting for new ideas to emerge. This concept of creativity is further overwhelmed by the mention of "various thoughts" wavering in the mind, indicating a rich inner world ready to be expressed.

The imagery of a "dip of red" and "a sudden streak of dawn" reminds us of the beauty of a new day, symbolising a fresh beginnings and the promise of new creations.

The use of the colour red, and sunshine serves to illustrate the transformative power of inspiration, suggesting that each new idea can illuminate the path forward.

The poem concludes with the notion of "bright sunshine" providing clarity and vision, strengthening the idea that creativity can lead to beautiful outcomes. The overall tone is optimistic, celebrating the journey of artistic expression and the endless possibilities that lie ahead.

Through its concise yet suggestive language, the poet captures the essence of the creative process, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences of inspiration and renewal.


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Review of In My Way 2026  
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{b}{c:blue} "Beginning of Writer's Block!" is another classic poem that is written by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. The poem captures the heart-touching stresses. It is full of creativity and suggests the symbolised struggle of creativity and the emotional weight of unexpressed thoughts.

The imagery of "paper-thin silence" and a "folded secret" stresses a sense of tension and introspection, suggesting that the act of writing is full of both potential and restraint. The poet tussles with the temptation to reveal hidden by the crease that "bites deep," indicating the pain associated with unspoken words.
The phrase "the weight of what isn't said is heavier than ink" poignantly illustrates the burden of silence and the complexities of communication. This line suggests that the unexpressed thoughts can often feel more significant than the written word itself, focusing on the emotional turmoil that accompanies writer's block. The decision to let the unspoken remain a "knot" reflects a conscious choice to hold onto these feelings, suggesting that sometimes, the act of withholding can be as powerful as writing.

Overall, the poem encapsulates the essence of writer's block as not merely a lack of words but as a deep emotional experience filled with tension, longing, and the struggle between expression and silence.

The poet's work resonates with anyone who has faced similar creative challenges, making it a relatable exploration"Beginning of Writer's Block!" of the complexities of the writing strategies.{/c} {/b}


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Review of Daily Cascade  
for entry "On Art's Influence
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This blog post reflects on the photocopy of our daily life, explaining the heart-touching impact of art on the author's life, highlighting personal experiences and broader insights about the nature of art.

The logger shares a familial connection to the visual arts, mentioning two artist cousins and a past collaboration with a mural artist, Mr Cardiff, who had a notable career in New York City. This connection to art has been a significant influence throughout the author's life, even though they ceased painting after M Cardiff's passing in the early 1980s.

The logger considers why art resonates so deeply with people, suggesting that it transcends logical understanding and connects with our innermost emotions. Art serves as a medium for expressing private feelings, providing healing and reassurance that our experiences—whether fears, longings, or joys—are shared by others. This shared experience fosters a sense of community and understanding.

Furthermore, the author explores how art inspires a sense of possibility and transformation, encouraging a reimagining of the world. This transformative power of art is not limited to the visual arts but extends to music and literature, too.

The author describes art as offering a spiritual experience, suggesting that it can move and shape individuals in considering ways.

Ultimately, this blog post carries a deep appreciation for art as a vital force in personal and collective human experience.
It is a beautiful blog post entry.
Write on!


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Review of In My Way 2026  
for entry "SO PREHISTORIC
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"So Prehistoric" is an artistic creation by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem recalls a deep connection to the ancient and instinctive aspects of nature.

The imagery of stone and the slow breathing of the earth suggests a timelessness that surpasses human existence. The mention of the sun drawing blood from a giant fern focuses on the basic, visceral relationship between the elements of nature, stressing the life force that permeates the environment.

The absence of a ticking clock signifies a departure from modern lifestyle and the constraints of time, allowing the reader to engage in a more primal experience. The distant roaring, described as a sound older than memory, resilience the idea of an ancient world that exists beyond human recollection, inviting reflection on the earth's history.

The poem's atmosphere is further enriched by the imagery of dust settling on bones, symbolising the passage of time and the inevitability of decay. This recollects a sense of silence that is both haunting and profound, suggesting that the echoes of the past linger in the present.
Overall, this poetic work captures the essence of a prehistoric world, inviting readers to reflect on their place within the continuum of nature and time.


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for entry "Those Cookies
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Those Cookies" is one of the beautiful poems that is written by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh. This poem recalls a sensual experience centred around the delightful imagery of cookies. This presentation is an unforgettable experience.

The opening lines introduce a "golden edge" and the "whisper of vanilla," setting a warm and inviting tone. The mention of a "secret map of chocolate chips" suggests a hidden complexity within the cookies, while the "tiny melted stars" adds an impulsive touch, enriching the overall allure.

The poem also focuses on the presence of coconut powder, describing it as an "invisible beauty," which stresses the idea that some of the most delightful aspects of life are not immediately visible. This notion of hidden beauty echoes throughout the poem, suggesting that true enjoyment often lies beneath the surface.

Overall, the poet brilliantly captures the essence of extravagance and the joy of savouring simple pleasures through vivid imagery and sensory details.

This poem invites the readers to appreciate the heavenly taste of cookies, symbolising a deeper appreciation for life's small, yet significant, moments.


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for entry "The Magician
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"The Magician" is another beauty by the poet Bodhisattwa Parekh that captures the obsessing essence of magic through thorough imagery and a sense of wonder.

The poem opens with the magician's silk scarf disappearing in a puff of smoke, symbolising the fleeting nature of magic and illusion. This act sets the tone for the mysterious environment that saturates this piece, inviting the readers to contemplate the secrets behind the magician's smile.

The appearance of a dove from an empty hat further stresses the theme of surprise and delight. This moment not only displays the magician's skill but also recalls a sense of childlike wonder in the audience, focusing on the transformative power of magic to fascinate and inspire.

As the poem progresses, the magician's ability to rearrange the deck of cards with remarkable speed introduces an element of anticipation. The line about knowing which card the audience will choose before they do underlines the magician's mastery and the complicated connection between performer and audience. This interplay creates a sense of conspiracy, as the readers are left to contemplate the boundaries between reality and illusion.

Overall, the poet's poem effectively encapsulates the charisma of magic, blending elements of surprise, skill, and the joy of wonder. The imagery and themes reverberate deeply, inviting the readers to reflect on the enchanting experiences that magic can bring into our lives.

In conclusion, this poem is another outstanding creation of the poet.


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