Remember this is just my opinion. I am no expect and do not proclaim to be. Feel free to ignore everything I say, for the only thing that matters is what you think. Thank you for sharing your work with me
My personal Opinion:
Wow. What a great introduction to a story. Makes me want to read more, and I will. I’m curious to see what they did to this person. Great Work!
My suggestions:
I have made a few suggestions, which I have sent via email. Simple revisions that you may or may not agree with, remember this is JMOP.
The part that sticks out in my mind :
Would it still be worth it?
Would you still be you by the end of it?
Would you still want to be special?
Remember all that matters is you enjoy what you do. So keep on putting your words in stories or poems. Keep up the great work. Thank you for sharing your work, I really enjoyed this Story.
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