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Review of The Train Home  
Review by rik Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I like the story, I would like the dialog to flow a bit smoother, less description of who said. I'm afraid I am not experienced enough to tell how to go about it but I am a reader. I just would like it to flow faster. It's a story that still needs to be told. We keep doing the same thing over.
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