That was fairly engaging for such a short story. I found the ending a bit confusing at first read. I had to go over it again after reading the Attribution note to really catch the meaning. Perhaps that's due more to my own ignorance than the author's writing style. All and all it was worth the read.
I found the storyline to be effectively engaging. I was anxious to see the point of observation the alien visitors would make and was not disappointed by their rather blatant statement of facts and statistics exposing the violent flaw of the human condition. That being said I found the prose could use a little seasoning. The descriptions and settings could have injected more excitement into the story.
All and all it was worth the ride.
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