creating four different versions of Pasio is just not going to work. if someone is looking for one of the other medias forms when they go a story and don't find it they are unlikely to check your profile for the one their looking for the one they want.
I'm glad you take the time to write, everyone should have the opportunity to do so. I'm glad you feel confident in your work and that you have a place where you can express yourself. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
It's a pretty decent story for this site, I'm glad I got to read it and I look forward to seeing more stuff by this author. It does feel like this story needs a bit more flushing out as things happened a bit quickly for my taste but that is kind of par for the course for short stories so what can you do.
Sorry you're not feeling well your work seems to be doing well with what you can publish though so keep up with the good work and I hope that you feel better soon
Shrunk into his hands is to short to give anything more the 3 star and the like of adding anything in 3 year means its Probably not going to get any better. still the chapters that were added when this thing first came out do seem to be properly written even if it is not much choice in the beginning on where this is going. if the author or someone else ever does come to this the add-on to it it could become something interesting.
always nice to see fantasy wrighters wrighting a good story on this site, Especially when it says well written is this one. Not enough people write about the fay in interesting ways, I appreciate your work for doing a good job with that and for anyone reading this review I who is not the author you should give this story a try.
what a richly descripted story, this is well made. its a bit more power fantasy then I normally go for but still fun. I can't say its doing anything I have not see before but it does do it quite well it hardly matters. all and all I think this is an alright one shot.
This was a fun short Horror Story, it wasn't too surprising after all it was About a page loan that is only so much you can do with that but it's still fun, and I think the author did a wonderful job writing it, and I'm certainly going to be looking into some of the other stuff they wrote after reading this as it shows that they know what they're doing.
this is well made and I quit enjoyed the read, the characters are fascinating and I find their Dynamic very interesting. the emotion feels real and raw, thank You so much for writing this. I look forward to reading more of your stuff know that I have run into it.
This Interactive seems all right, a lot of the chapters are set up but that does just guarantee that when it does get to the meat it is the meat that you wanted. the author clearly cares about maintaining a good story structure and shows education to maintain that throughout this Interactive.
It's all right, it fulfills its purpose and the writing is good. It just it takes a bit of wading through The seasons in which characters in that season you specifically want to shrink which is a bit tiring. then once you did fully onto your route it seems to be alright.
This is a pretty good prologue I must say, it immediately grips the reader with a bit of existential dread about whatever Eldridge Horrors happening to the young woman and Promises an interesting story to come. I am however taking off half a star because of that last line which reads too much like a movie trailer.
It's a fun little story/poem nothing groundbreaking but the story is sweet if simple, the rhyming scheme is well maintained, making the flow of the poem come off almost as a simple drum beat in likely the same way a child playing the drum wood which definitely gets you extra points. Overall I liked this story, and I'm glad I got a chance to read it.
you're writing is good and I hope you feel better within a reasonable time frame, I'm sorry to hear the world has you down so bad. life is just a pyramid scheme But there is still good in the world even if it is mostly books. hope you find some more good ones
Did you just want to give out free points to people because you only have one option in the poll, It's all Points are great and all that but I can't in good conscience give a good review to a pool that only has one option.
I chose the home monitor mostly because their job demands immediate action when that Proclamation is being made, even if they don't believe that woman they still need to act as they do in so far as getting her to a safe location away from her real or imagined perpetrator. So without further context of the story you're working on this is the most I can give you.
This is a kind of fun pole but there are only so many sex jokes you can tell in a row before they kind of start getting a bit derivative. It's still fun over all but I feel like there could be more here then gods fucking and donkey sitting there asses connected
I feel certain that both education and experience are fundamentally necessary for any endeavor, I do lean more towards education simply because I have seen too many people without it. I have however seen very educated people still made mistakes due to their lack of experience so it is obvious that it is not the be all end all in an endeavor
I'm sorry to hear that you were in a relationship that was unbalanced like that, it is always unfortunate when the affection we feel for others it's not reciprocated. This is a great story, thank you so much for telling us it. It is always great to hear such a heartfelt story, and you do a wonderful job of telling it
I'm not sure what you're trying to do with your metaphor here which kind of keeps this story from being compelling for me. However, your grammar is good and I like the iambic pentameter Which shows that it's not poorly written, just that at least for me the metaphor you may be trying to convey isn't getting through.
thank you this was very Helpful it really gave me a better understanding of how this site works and how diff points are distributed and it was done in a concise and helpful manner thank you
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