I had to read this poem 4 times to get the ideal picture of it. It´s very graphical and from a total different viewpoint of what I am used to. The summer brings the ende while the winter is a new beginning... here (where I am) it´s the other way around. What´s an end to one is a beginning to someone else. I like it... it´s short but full of meaning.
I enjoyed reading the beginning of your story. Very surrealistic already and I really love surrealism. I hope you continue writing on this one, I´d be glad to read more.
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