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Review by Randy Rich Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)
i think i know someone like this. You may need to re word a couple of things and at the end of each verse, it should be one complete thought...in other words, each verse is a complete thought but broken down into individual sentences with an ending, no continuation to the next sentence.

Hope this helps,

Randy
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