Raimusha's (raimusha) Reviews

Raimusha

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10 Total Reviews Given

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#4750128

Review of A real nightmare

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

burdens weighing on me : The family, the job and all I had to do i no longer had any time for leisure.

Family life is like an eternal whirlwind. Respect to yall.

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#4750125

Review of Water shortage Problem

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)

Your article could be enhanced by focusing on a particular area. Why not focus on water shortage in India?

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#4750122

Review of Love for poetry

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Feel what I feel. Blissful in a miserable world.

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#4750120

Review of What Am I?

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I feel humbled.

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#4750119

Review of That Big Beautiful Tree

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Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I love it!

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#4750104

Review of HOTEL CALIFORNIA

Review by Raimusha

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I enjoyed the story.

My flow was disrupted after reading the first paragraph.

Here is a humble suggestion:

The year was 1989, I was 16 when I ran away from my boring small town in Montana. Today, I am still 16. I'd be 17 had I stayed home.

I believe this will make the first paragraph flow better.

Thank you.