nice poetry.got the feeling you were trying to convey.but still to me it seems a bit incomplete.i believe there always should be a way out of the feelings which are generated.that is what i think might be missing.there is that slight bit of confusion at the end which leaves me thinking.may be i do not understand it clearly but that is what is confusing.
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