This was an amazing story. I really like that he imagined her as his bride, all in white. I find this one of the more challenging ways to describe a girl, but that's probably because I am one...*gives little laugh*. If I had a dime for every failed attempt at describing a girl like that...*shakes head.* I just want to close by saying that this encourges me to keep trying, especially when I'm writing from a boy's POV!
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