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Review of I Feel  
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)
Nicely written with a easy, simple flow to follow. Easy to feel what the person is feeling as we all have been there once before. I can understand the feeling of loneliness and the wanting. Well thought out. The only thing I can suggest fixing is on the line (6 from bottom)- "Their no where (nowhere) t (to) be found". Overall, a good poem my friend. Keep on writing...
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