I'll be honest and blunt with you this isn't your best work but, it isn't your worst either and you informed me that you were going to be using AI to help you with writing this chapter honestly it's good that you're willing to try something new tho it also feels like this chapter was initially written by someone else whom didn't know or listen to you when you told them what you were going for and later heavily edited by you into something readable that resembles what you were going for but as a result it's almost completely disjointed from the previous chapters in terms of content and context honestly I would recommend using AI to help write a chapter outline or keep notes on the previous chapters and the characters in them not write or edit the chapter itself since as you confided in me and from what I have personally seen it sucks balls at those parts of the creative writing process other than that it's a useful tool for helping you, keep track of what you're writing which in turn helps to reduce the chances of writing yourself into a corner, forcing you to start writing from the beginning over and over again speeding the process up.
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