I really liked it. It really made me imagine a decrepit old woman. Also I wonder why she was holding the book. I thought that maybe you used to many old fashioned words like whilst and betwixt where more modern words would have been more subtle and given better flow to the writing. Other than that I thought it was a really good and vibrant tableau and I will check out more of your stuff.
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