You know what? I really like that kind of twist at the end. At first, It seemed a bit too simple, too easy, if you will. But it's good. In the first half, this simplicity adds to the general impression of childish innocence; in the second half, the blunt, to-the-point language gives the poem an icy, sinister hue. I give it a 4.
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