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Review of Motivate My Muse  
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (2.0)
listing your muse true brilence
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Review of Family Portrait  
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (1.0)
a very dark thing to write.
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Review of DUET  
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)
This is a beatiful poem. You have done great work on it.
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
Sorry to say but this story is restricting. who are you to know how the deck is built to be useable. also you can't make yourself better then yugi or Kaiba or have any of there key cards so it is hard to make a good deck for the story. Don't get me wrong i am a Yugioh fan but I am just being realisic
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Review of Hinata the slave  
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.0)
Remember Unless you are telling the story of how Hinata became his sex slave SHe is completly obedent unless Naruto is ordering her not to be.
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Review of master naruto  
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.0)
In the next chapter make sure to have the first sex seen. This one should only be Naruto and Hinata.
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Review of Training You  
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
this is a nice story.
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Review of What is Erotica?  
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
in my opinon this qustion is well fair.
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Review of The Outcast  
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.0)
In my opionion the next scence should be a sex scene but that is only a suggestion.
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